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Author Topic: my animation - i Hope you don't hate it  (Read 3112 times)

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Re: my animation - i Hope you don't hate it
« Reply #15 on: April 24, 2010, 03:13:15 pm »
this is my new one, a collaboration with GHXYK2. it's called "BEHAVERS"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWHHDpdFj5Y

not musical. THOTTS?
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Re: my animation - i Hope you don't hate it
« Reply #16 on: April 24, 2010, 06:03:57 pm »
i had a really good laugh at the tomato but then the gun came out and i went ._.
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Re: my animation - i Hope you don't hate it
« Reply #17 on: April 25, 2010, 08:03:45 am »
It was an interestiing thought, but it went lame at the end.
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Re: my animation - i Hope you don't hate it
« Reply #18 on: April 25, 2010, 07:18:31 pm »
Yeah, it all just feels... tossed off.

There's a laugh here or there in your stuff, mostly on just interesting line readings but...

If you actually want people to pay attention, you're gonna have to put in a lot more effort.

My suggestrion would be to watch some FAMILY GUY and then do the exact opposite of that.
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