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Author Topic: Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04  (Read 6637 times)

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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« on: April 27, 2004, 09:54:20 am »
There you go sailor - better cover for you?

Ray truly has a way with words. Or something.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2004, 11:32:11 am »
I found this one not so great, except that Ray is on the cover of his own novel.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2004, 02:06:32 pm »
Who else ran to their closet, pulled out their grandfather's nearly mint WWII flight jacket, and buried their nose in the worn out lining, taking a deep, long whiff while sobbing?

OK fine, it was my ex-girlfriend's 80s-ass reproduction goatskin Cooper A2, not my grandfather's.

OK OK, she wasn't my girlfriend! She wouldn't give me the time of day. That bitch. I stole the jacket.

All right, it's not mint either. The zipper pull is a thermometer. Parts are threadbare and worn. And it smells like a bar, a vomity smoky bar.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2004, 02:11:55 pm »
I'm a little split on this. On one hand, this is pretty much a funny strip; on the other, I'm getting a little tired of Ray inevitably being involved in every plot arc that comes along and am worried about this becoming Ray-centric. For that matter, I also sort of wonder how the hell Ray's past actually sorts out, given all the facts we have to date.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2004, 02:11:59 pm »
I love the little details: the rose at Ray's feet, the glasses, the flight cap worn in bed. His feet all poking out, the blanket wrinkly.
Is the cap on his heart the whole time he's getting back in the Cherokee and backing out the driveway?
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2004, 03:29:21 pm »
Settle down, TALKYdude.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #6 on: April 27, 2004, 03:48:16 pm »
I find Ray's prose style rather touching.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #7 on: April 27, 2004, 03:52:40 pm »
THIS JUST IN: Ugly people are no longer allowed to use photos of themselves as avatars.







Oh yeah, and I'm wise to you wisenacres who will say that I must remove my avatar too.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2004, 03:55:31 pm »
Dude! Don't be dissin' Elvis!
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2004, 04:36:12 pm »
Please don't reprint Ray's whole book.  The very thought of this terrifies me.
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2004, 08:28:21 pm »
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Ugly people are no longer allowed to use photos of themselves as avatars.[/size]


how are we to know if we are ugly?  do i need to sign up for hotornot.com with my avatar or something?
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2004, 08:38:20 pm »
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Who else ran to their closet, pulled out their grandfather's nearly mint WWII flight jacket, and buried their nose in the worn out lining, taking a deep, long whiff while sobbing?


Me.
(I did.)
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2004, 08:43:17 pm »
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Ugly people are no longer allowed to use photos of themselves as avatars.[/size]


how are we to know if we are ugly?  do i need to sign up for hotornot.com with my avatar or something?


Dude, you GOTTA know by now...
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Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2004, 08:59:15 pm »
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Ugly people are no longer allowed to use photos of themselves as avatars.[/size]


how are we to know if we are ugly?  do i need to sign up for hotornot.com with my avatar or something?


Sing In the Ghetto!  It's deep and pathos-filled.
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Re: Danger at 2 1/2 feet - 27/04
« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2004, 09:43:59 pm »
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There you go sailor - better cover for you?

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no. there needs to be some busty-ass ho' up in thurr.
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