V, it's a good outline, but it'd typically fall off the rails after 2b with a "Wait... what was I talking about?" If it's picked up and finished, it isn't for somewhere between half an hour and four days.
Maybe it just needs roman numeral phases:
I. First Attempt
1...
II. Recall and Second Attempt
3...
By the way: 5 tabs, because I'd been on a kick and knew a girl named Mel; it was my 20th birthday so my buds Paul and Adam were in class while I skipped; I cleaned my room and listened to Pearl Jam then decided to go on a hike; nobody knew but Mel, and nobody knew my plans because I had none; Parents' Day was two days later and mine were coming.
Wait. What was I talking about?
Edit: On my hike, I sat down in a pasture overlooking the valley and had a cigarette, and letters formed in the trees opposite, peeling off into the sky. It was like if they'd had anything to say to me, they'd have said it then. This was as close to a visionquest-quality hallucination as I've ever come. I'm only saying this because Keith's posts reminded me. Sorry it took so long to get it down.
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