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« Reply #15 on: December 06, 2003, 06:04:13 am »
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diplomatic sentence


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Quote from: "jough"
subtle insult



equals equals. definitely.
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« Reply #16 on: December 06, 2003, 06:34:56 am »
I suppose it's all a question of intent.  If you intended it as a subtle insult, that's precisely what is was.

I suppose I'm just a Pollyanna because I read it as an attempt to be nice.  I yam what I yam.
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« Reply #17 on: December 06, 2003, 06:36:07 am »
Also, kudos to Choop for his insight into the nature of interpersonal communications.
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« Reply #18 on: December 06, 2003, 07:17:12 am »
at first, i thought he was saying a nice.

but the 'obviously' shows it to be meanie.
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« Reply #19 on: December 06, 2003, 05:02:04 pm »
With all diplomacy, I can say that it wasn't to my taste, because I tend to prefer comics that are either funny (Achewood, Calvin & Hobbes, etc.) or have an interesting narrative storyline (Scary Go Round, etc.).
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« Reply #20 on: December 06, 2003, 06:49:32 pm »
i prefer comics with balloonsex
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« Reply #21 on: December 06, 2003, 06:59:16 pm »
When I saw your real name, I thought for a minute that I knew you IRL.  Then I realized that I just know somebody named Frank Sarnie.  

Odd!
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« Reply #22 on: December 06, 2003, 07:01:12 pm »
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because I tend to prefer comics that are either funny .


My god, jough, just quit while you're ahead!
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« Reply #23 on: December 06, 2003, 08:50:08 pm »
I will freely admit that I tend to prefer comics that have points or at least are amusing in their non-pointedness. This... not so much.
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« Reply #24 on: December 07, 2003, 12:57:52 am »
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I will freely admit that I tend to prefer comics that have points or at least are amusing in their non-pointedness.


Which I guess means that an absurdist strip about realtors would really ring your bells.
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« Reply #25 on: December 07, 2003, 04:36:30 am »
The original post asked for constructive critiicism. I don't know that I can do that.

I don't get it either.

You admit that it's traced.
And you use the song from 'Frazier' as most of your text.

Not exactly striking a blow for art here....but you do have the right to "draw" and "write" whatever.  It dies because it is neither creative or funny. I could have given you points for creativity if it were drawn or written by you.  No hopes for funny in any case.

Sorry.
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« Reply #26 on: December 07, 2003, 07:35:19 pm »
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I will freely admit that I tend to prefer comics that have points or at least are amusing in their non-pointedness.


Which I guess means that an absurdist strip about realtors would really ring your bells.

Oh, that's a dreadful pun. So dreadful I almost missed it entirely. Shine on, you crazy diamond.
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« Reply #27 on: December 07, 2003, 08:16:54 pm »
Sorry, V-Adore, no pun there.  It's like raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiin, on your wedding day.

It sucks, it's so fuck*ng typical, but it isn't at all ironic.

Don't cha think?
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« Reply #28 on: December 07, 2003, 08:26:37 pm »
how is my comic so typical?

firstly, it's a comic based on a tv show. a dry sitcom.
secondly, my name is not fran sarkie. it's made up. it's a silly name.
thirdly, ur a baby
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« Reply #29 on: December 07, 2003, 08:41:25 pm »
How can it frustrate me more here, when someone doesn't use correct sentence form, capitlisation or spelling, when I can go to a random forum for any of a million things, where every post is like that, and not care as much.
Oh I do care, trust me. Hence it's not odd for me to care seeing it here.

But I'm not a part of this.

ur... What the hell? Jesus!


If you only have three fingers I'll let you off...
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